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Rishard Allen's avatar

I love that you did a voice over !

Melissa's avatar

Oh thanks! I got so distracted. THREE TAKES, MAYBE FOUR? WHO KNOWS.

V.Nightingale (Other Girls)'s avatar

Narrating is a severe undertaking. I am the worst at reading out loud I’ve discovered.

I teach children to read so that’s not an ideal discovery…

Melissa's avatar

lol.

I actually found it pretty interesting to see where my writing voice and speaking voice were different and where I wanted to add or remove things. So this was a good exercise.

I doubt you’re the WORST. There’s gotta be someone worse®. ← lol.

V.Nightingale (Other Girls)'s avatar

You do an amazing narration, really.

V.Nightingale (Other Girls)'s avatar

I find that such an interesting exercise as well. I’ll often read out stuff I’ve written to see if it matches my instinctive storytelling flow. I often end up changing writing based on verbal inclinations that sound more natural.